tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post3363567939421279985..comments2023-03-27T00:22:53.511-07:00Comments on Truant Pen: Living Hell 2 (#fridayflash)David Mastershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12809185582216906363noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-20581206362629187112010-03-29T08:28:02.395-07:002010-03-29T08:28:02.395-07:00Ouch! Enjoyed the piece though. Like Gracie, I thi...Ouch! Enjoyed the piece though. Like Gracie, I think I've dated some who took up that offer. ;)Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-55587966656245611902010-03-28T09:00:51.126-07:002010-03-28T09:00:51.126-07:00Hmm, I think I dated this guy once...
Enjoying th...Hmm, I think I dated this guy once...<br /><br />Enjoying the devil deals.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-51781916297341427412010-03-28T08:47:17.190-07:002010-03-28T08:47:17.190-07:00Considering I am a lesbian, I'm still declinin...Considering I am a lesbian, I'm still declining... Sex without love, not a deal for me - so many seem to have accepted the deal, and at what price emotionally? Big ouch. Excellently written piece, David, and thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-40732856181842481512010-03-28T08:41:40.774-07:002010-03-28T08:41:40.774-07:00Whoa, now that is a powerful ad. Very well-written...Whoa, now that is a powerful ad. Very well-written, chilling because it is what so many have actually done, it strikes a cord somewhere down deep.Anne Tyler Lordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16909141266966569378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-26049913702430953942010-03-28T07:40:12.624-07:002010-03-28T07:40:12.624-07:00This was a whole new level of creepy. Several leve...This was a whole new level of creepy. Several levels in fact. I do think having the full devotion of every woman would get tiresome. <br /><br />The last line was quite chilling. I could almost hear the voice.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-38887149610453520392010-03-28T06:50:47.243-07:002010-03-28T06:50:47.243-07:00Too many men have already made this deal, but that...Too many men have already made this deal, but that said, I did enjoy reading this post. Take care, GillianAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-33947765463225514522010-03-27T16:21:48.277-07:002010-03-27T16:21:48.277-07:00Considering I'm not a lesbian I'll need to...Considering I'm not a lesbian I'll need to decline your not so kind offer.<br /><br />Well written though. :)Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-14302243919993159622010-03-27T15:50:34.389-07:002010-03-27T15:50:34.389-07:00Sir,
Thank you for your generous offer to telepat...Sir,<br /><br />Thank you for your generous offer to telepathically control and rape all the women of earth. Surely you identified me as a heterosexual male and assumed I was a prime candidate.<br /><br />Unfortunately I'm not nearly as fascinated with romantic love or sex as you estimated. They rank just below a new iPhone and just above a really strong bowel movement on my list of priorities. And I don't care for iPhones.<br /><br />So I'm afraid I'll have to decline your offer. However if you'd like to have tea so that I can get to know you, I may come to admire you. Likely not more than all the rest of creation, but as a friend, and I do go out of my way for friends.<br /><br />Best of luck finding platonic and fulfilling friendships.<br /><br />Cheers,<br />J.C. WiswellJohn Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-84659198687153396392010-03-27T14:16:09.836-07:002010-03-27T14:16:09.836-07:00No deal, no way, no how. Nice story.No deal, no way, no how. Nice story.Misty Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10900414309618213580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-24891693701351545352010-03-27T11:18:08.115-07:002010-03-27T11:18:08.115-07:00Great little story and the offer sounds like it wo...Great little story and the offer sounds like it would be a blast. Mine's already been given, so I'd try and take the offer and cheat the person. Likely I'd end up screwing myself over but I'd try. But like Cathy said Bring it ON!<br /><br />Mine is up here http://bit.ly/9UTNotRandilinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10560902510382820057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-24518208779902766652010-03-27T11:03:02.428-07:002010-03-27T11:03:02.428-07:00All these sensitive men taking the high road here....All these sensitive men taking the high road here... pffftt....<br />I'd take the deal. <br />Bring it ON, baby! I want me some hearts to break! Muahahahahahahahah!Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-78103496372947120872010-03-27T08:37:33.919-07:002010-03-27T08:37:33.919-07:00I'm with Sam on this, both in the wondering wh...I'm with Sam on this, both in the wondering who placed it, and in not taking the deal. That was an excellent story.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-56510976622485489532010-03-27T07:58:48.547-07:002010-03-27T07:58:48.547-07:00I really, really like this story. Makes me wonder ...I really, really like this story. Makes me wonder who placed the advert, and no, I'll not be taking the deal!Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361651251233078437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-55405665297980348082010-03-27T07:34:16.787-07:002010-03-27T07:34:16.787-07:00But how enjoyable can that be? Any woman a man des...But how enjoyable can that be? Any woman a man desires (I'm assuming ad is for men!) to enjoy in any number of ways, without feeling any affection or love?<br /><br />Oh..forgot we're talking about Certain kinds of people :)<br /><br />Like the ones who would appreciate such a deal.<br /><br />What's interestingly left out is that the one who wrote the ad does not promise love in return.<br /><br />In perpetuity. Quite chilling piece, David.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-67134221117656190782010-03-27T07:11:46.421-07:002010-03-27T07:11:46.421-07:00Love the last line particularly, great little piec...Love the last line particularly, great little piece!<br />*shudders*mazzz_in_Leedshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01498100483681096442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4518877017463523115.post-78191139425485919982010-03-27T07:04:30.787-07:002010-03-27T07:04:30.787-07:00Oh David,
This is priceless. I'm afraid rathe...Oh David,<br /><br />This is priceless. I'm afraid rather too many men have made this deal.<br /><br />Worth the wait & I get to comment first!<br /><br />VirginiaVirginia Moffatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12071059148315715405noreply@blogger.com